First rough draft

In this draft we have very limited shots as most are still waiting to be edited, we are missing the break up with the girlfriend and plenty more drinking shots which we are going to be focussing on, in the next few weeks to perfect. This draft has allowed us to see what techniques we could incorporate into our work.

First Draft Review

At the start of the music video it shows the main character Dom, waking up to an alarm clock with alcohol in his hand, and around his room, this shows that he has had a rough night due to the break-up. When he opens his curtains to look outside, he picks up a beer can and then throws it on his bed, then it comes back into his hand (we edited this) this shows that he is trying to get rid of the alcohol but it keeps coming back to him and this is due to his heartache. We then incorporated footage in black and white to show the relationship, this is because it shows that the relationship is now in the past because they have broken up, so it shows flashbacks of what they used to be like (happy). The draft ends with him on his own with alcohol and he receives a text from a friends asking him to go pub. 

We feel that the first draft is good and will defiantly enable us to build on it in order for us to improve it. However clearly the video is not finished, but we have many shots to put into the video. Things what could be improved on is shorter clips so it flows a bit more as a music video.